Lord...
This's a song that i wrote, it's a bit short, but i kinda like it though, hope u like it too, enjoy....
Lord I just wanna make it right
So please show me the light...tonight
Lord I’m calling out your name
I’m drowning in my pain...again
Lord the one and only God
Please take my hand and cure…my heart
Lord so merciful and kind
I keep that in mind...I repent
Please forgive as I cry
And guide me till I die
Lyrics, melodies and vocals by Abo nedal :D
| lord.mp3 |
11 comments:
أبو نضال
رائعة جدا جدا
و الصوت جميل جدا و صادق
بجد أهنئك
محمد
أخى محمد جزاك الله خيرا
دا بس من ذوقك :)
تحياتى يا أستاذ فضفضة :)
hey
U
quiet
good
the
lyric
needs
much
time
the melody
seems
deep,
lovely,
& impressive
vocals
are
not bad,
yet
they're
so simple,
&
need a lot
the gr8 politician has passed by :)
applause everyone for my dear bro. ibn khaldoon
considering the lyrics if you have any suggestions i'd behappy to hear them.
as for the vocals i agree, but you didn't tell me what exactly are the points that i need to work on.
thnx for your kind comment
salamz
إيه يا باشا المواهب اللي كنت مخبيها عننا دي
انت لازم يطلع عنك تقرير لفوووق
عند عمك رضا كده
معقولة عندنا المواهب دي ونايمين
ده احنا نعملك حفلة في الأوبرا يابني
أحييييييييييييييييييييييك بشدة
أخوك
خالد أبو الفضل
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يا خلود و لا مواهب و لا حاجة، انت عارفنى على ادى
و بعدين بلاش حوار التقرير دا الله يخليك
استرعليا الله يسترك
:)))
لا حرمنى الله منك أخى الحبيب
It is really very good , I'm impressed , I wish it is a bit longer .
I've only one comment .
Did u know me ?!!
I guess yeh
how can i not know my one and only sweet beloved father :)
i really didn't expect you to comment on my blog, but you can't imagine how happy i am :)))
thank you so much for your support, and al7amdulillah that you liked it, hope that you like the rest of the blog as well...
peace be with you :)
Good post.
Thanks Moyna :)
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